Things I Will Do During The Summer

                          I wrote a paragraph at school and it was about what I would do during the summer.

                                                                Here it is

                         I will go swimming, have ice cream,eat frozen freezes, play at the park, play outside, and play with my rats in the summer.  I love going swimming because it feels great when it's hot out. Having ice cream in the summer is awesome because it tastes good and it cools you down when it's hot.  Playing at the park in the summer is only terrific when there's a breeze outside to cool you down.  I like playing outside with my friends in the summer because we can have play dates, get ice cream at monks, and go to stores to buy things.  Playing with my rats in the summer is Awesome because it's funny to watch them roll on their backs to cool of.  As you can see going swimming, having ice cream, eating frozen freezes, playing at the park, playing outside,and playing with my rats in the summer is AMAZING, AWESOME, TERRIFIC, and DELICOUS!

                         I think this paragraph is amazing because it is so juicy.